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Andrew Bravissimo

Cohenour

English 102

16 October 2009

                                    Breaking through the Dollhouse Construct

            Ibsen’s “A Doll House” is a tale that depicts life within a construct.  Much like a child would play out a game with dolls, the lives of the characters are privy to whim.  Torvald and Nora Helmer function as two characters that change and even reverse rolls within the story to illustrate the fallibility of conventionality and propriety.   Their lives cause the reader to ponder the tragic price to be paid when one chooses a socially constructed life as opposed to a conscientiously considered life.

         A doll house is a miniature construct based on a reality in which a child can “play” out relationships with inanimate objects. This attempt to understand the relational world as it is modeled is an exercise in development. Without maturity or reflection, a child simply emulates and recreates scenarios in which they have participated.  Ibsen demonstrates the horror and tragedy of this scenario when the life sized construct is imagined.  Unlike a child, however, Ibsen uses conventional society to mirror back to the reader the fallibility of social fabric. Ibsen uses realism as the medium to criticize the constructs of propriety and status. Through his portrayal of Torvald and Nora Helmer, the reader is forced to call into question how convention shapes our relative world and where we should take part in shaping our relational world.

         Torvald and Nora Helmer live in the middle class of a stratified society and have allowed themselves to be defined by the conventions of their social world.  Status and success are derived from maintaining or succeeding this class standing and rewards are doled out to those who fit the mold. Torvald has been rewarded with a beautiful wife, young children, warm home, good income and the respect of his peers. Likewise, Nora shares the same creature comforts and is able to partake in the status as she demonstrates the richness of their lives through self, family and home portrayal and adornment.  The Helmer’s have everything going for them with blue skies and greener pastures ahead, they appear to be the veritable poster children of the socially accepted family.                                                                                                                                     Nora seems to love her life. It is evident that she enjoys all aspects of that existence, from the pet names and the playful games she shares with her husband to taking care of her children and the home. This defines who she is and she takes her role seriously. Nora clearly understands the roll she plays within the household, it is her job to keep her family well fed, in good health, and looking good. She will pragmatically utilize any means necessary to get the job done.  Her strongest socially derived tools are her ability to use her charms to manipulate and persuade people and situations to further the means or accomplish the goals of her family.                  

         Torvald is no less dedicated in his role. He is a man of unquestionable character. He is a good friend who likes fine things but indulges with great restraint as depicted in his ability to have his life without the constraints of debt. He is practical and keeps a tight rein on his finances and family because he is well aware of what happens to people who fail to function within the confines of society. He views life through the social lens and takes responsibility for upholding these traits, and exults in being an impeccable example of those values and a criticizer of those who fall short of the social ideal as with his ironic remarks in regard to Krogstad, “Just imagine how a man with that sort of guilt in him has to lie and cheat and deceive on all sides, has to wear a mask even with the nearest and dearest he has, even his own wife and children” (Ibsen 1238). He, as opposed to Nora, is fully aware that society is a brutal master. Severe punishment justly waits for its children when they deviate from the standards. With this understanding he, believes he is lone protector, the last bastion of strength against a cold, bitter world.  Torvald views Nora as someone who he must protect and save from the social elements. In a moment of ironic foreshadowing Torvald shares an intimate fantasy, “You know what, Nora—time and again I’ve wished you were in some terrible danger, just so I could stake my life and soul and everything, for your sake” (Ibsen 1261). Helmer sees himself as the master of his own destiny and as long as he maintains this integrity, he controls the world around him. He so embraces the social structure that he is completely dependent upon the construct and does not realize its limitations and weaknesses.                                                                                                                                                      Eventually, the very constructs that served to build the Helmer’s family, becomes the means to tear them apart. As characters who fully embrace social convention, they are left without the necessary tools to overcome the problems they face. When their allegiance to the construct brings about possible destruction, we can almost see a resounding biblical parallel. Similar to the fall from grace, as Eve handed Adam the fatal fruit, Nora is responsible for the ruin of her family within the social paradise they live in. Torvald is quick to blame Nora without taking into account his complicity. “Oh, what an awful awakening! In all these eight years—she who was my pride and joy—a hypocrite, a liar—worse, worse—a criminal! How infinitely disgusting it all is! The shame” (Ibsen1262).   It is in this light that the characters begin to change rolls, redefine, and question the world that surrounds them.                                                                   

    Nora has been consistent in her responsibilities to the family. The crux of the plot has Nora foraying into the world of men to procure a loan for the sake of saving her husband’s life, “It’s true—I’ve also got something to be proud and happy for. I’m the one who saved Torvald’s life” (Ibsen 1226). Apparently, from Nora’s perception, Torvald is too honorable and proud to borrow money, “Besides—Torvald, with all his masculine pride—how painfully humiliating for him if he ever found out that he was in debt to me. That would just ruin our relationship. Our beautiful family would never be the same (Ibsen1227). It is precisely here that we see the fallibility of the social constructs that surround them. Nora must preserve the integrity of the family. When faced with a gender restrictive construct and the failure of her manipulative and persuasive conventions, “I began talking about how lovely it would be for me to travel abroad like other young wives; I begged and I cried; I told him please remember my condition, to be kind and indulge me;” (Ibsen 1227), she is left to discover a new means to save her family. This leaves her in a situation that is unfamiliar and where she is far less savvy. Nora unwittingly enters into a fraudulent contract. Taking out the loan is pragmatic, nothing more than an extension of her wily ways to achieve the goals society has challenged her to overcome, merely another means to another end.  Yet because she had been protected from the ramifications of this aspect of the social/business world, she places her family at great risk.                                                     

    As head of household, Torvald and the family are synonymous; her indiscretion is his ruin.  When the prospect of being found fraudulent is manifested, the world, (as he views it) is going to condemn him. He reacts instantly and decisively. The once powerful man of prominence with an untarnished reputation instantly and utterly disappears as Torvald addresses Nora in regards to the perceived blackmailing from Krogstad: “I’ve got to appease him somehow or other. The thing has to be hushed up at any cost” (Ibsen 1263). Torvald’s moral superiority is gone; this once pillar of social standing and conviction becomes reduced to the very thing he abhors. Never once does he ask why she had entered into this loan. It seems he presumes that she is a childish spendthrift, a condition that he admonished, but also encouraged when he gives her money after lecturing her about indebtedness in the beginning of the play. In truth, she acted in love and responsibility. When being confronted with the letter and asked if what Krogstad writes is “true”, she answers boldly, if not a bit dramatically, “It is true. I’ve loved you more than all this world” (Ibsen 1262). Torvald’s complete and utter adherence to the social construct and its consequences deafens him to the love and pain of his wife’s dedication. In near panic for his well being, he reveals to Nora his ironic complicity:

            And as for you and me, it’s got to seem like everything between us is just as it was—to   the outside             world, that is. You’ll go right on living in this house, of course. But you can’t       

            be allowed to bring up the children; I don’t dare trust you with them.—Oh, to have to say                              this to someone I’ve loved so much! Well, that’s done with. From now on happiness                                   doesn’t matter; all that matters is saving the bits and pieces, the appearance—“(Ibsen 1263).    

This glimpse of Torvald’s inner being, this declaration of propriety over love and compassion facilitates as the catalyst of Nora’s exodus from the construct.

            Nora, depicted parenthetically as an actor’s cue “icily calm,” demonstrates her feelings of resolve and frustration as she answers, “yes” to the question Torvald asserts, “Can you see now what you’ve done to me?” (Ibsen 1263). Nora begins to realize that the world she knew and loved was a façade, that the man she loved within the construct was a mere construct himself, and that her entire life and understanding of the world around her was false. Where she was once “…kept like a hunted dove…” (Ibsen 1264), she chooses freedom from her gilded cage. Where Torvald had been the master of his eminent domain, he now reveals himself a slave to the conventions of society. “We’ll just be grateful and keep on repeating; it’s over now, it’s over! You hear me, Nora? You don’t seem to realize—it’s over. What’s it mean—that frozen look? Oh, poor Nora, I understand. You can’t believe I’ve forgiven you (Ibsen 1263). She becomes the master of her fate and he grovels to have his illusions replaced.                                                                  

         Torvald and Nora’s adherence to social convention so fully defined them that they became objects within the constructs themselves. In the end, it is Torvald’s betrayal of Nora’s perceived love for her that brings her to recognize the fallacy of her life and moves her in the direction to re-discover herself. Conversely, it is Torvald’s inability to recognize his erroneous role in their marriage that brings about the tragic ending. One has to wonder if this story could have had a happy ending. Had Torvald stopped for a moment to understand Nora’s revelation and joined with her in the understanding of how their lives had been artificially manufactured, could their relationship have been spared the separation? After all, it is not enough to understand the weight and dangers of social convention, if one does not realize that the only resolution is to have someone to share his or her burdens with.


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